Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Twine Narrative

I am using Twine to tell the story of how my character, Madeline Rodgers, went from being a cocktail waitress in a Las Vegas casino to living on the run as a psychic fortune-teller. The actual Twine itself goes through the day she discovered that her long-time boyfriend was a criminal, and she learns that she has to leave town.

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It was 4 AM when Madeline awoke from a deep sleep. She hadn’t been dreaming, but she knew immediately that something didn’t feel right. She grabbed her cell phone off of the night stand. She knew that her boyfriend Ryan needed to be awake at 6:30 for work, so she didn’t want to call and risk waking him. She sent a quick text asking him to call when he woke up. Madeline still didn’t feel relaxed. She decided to call her mother and check in, knowing that there was no time of day when her mother didn’t mind answering a phone call.

Still laying in bed, Madeline dialed the number to her childhood home. A few rings, and her mother’s tired voice answered. “Madeline? Is something wrong?”

“No Mom, I’m fine. I just woke up and had a terrible feeling something was wrong. I just wanted to call and make sure you were OK.” Sharing her fears aloud made them seem more absurd.

“Me and your dad are just fine, sweetie. Try to go back to sleep, you need some rest.”

Feeling slightly relieved by her mother’s reassuring voice, Madeline quickly drifted off back to sleep.

When she woke up at 9 AM, and there was still no call or text from Ryan, she began to worry again. She called his office, knowing he was always there by 8:45. His secretary said he wasn’t in yet. Hearing this, Madeline decided to stop by his apartment on the other side of town. At best, he was sick or he overslept. At worst, however, she didn’t even want to think about.


She rushed out of her house toward her car, but before she opened the driver’s side door, she noticed something was wrong. One of her tires had been slashed. Her stomach sank in fear. There was no time to investigate, however, as she ran to the bus stop to get to Ryan’s as fast as possible.

Madeline became frantic when she met a policeman blocking the door to Ryan’s apartment. After multiple attempts to go in, and requests to see Ryan or speak to him, the policeman told her that he needed to take her to the station for some questions.

At the station, Madeline’s world came crashing down. In the span of just a few minutes, she learned that her loving, caring boyfriend was missing, and he was the lead suspect in 6 ongoing murder investigations in the Las Vegas area, and could she provide any information on his whereabouts.  She told the policeman what she knew about his past, which wasn’t much. He had grown up in Phoenix, his parents were divorced but his father passed away last year. He went to Arizona State for his undergrad, and if she had any more news she’d call.

She rushed home from the police station as soon as possible. She needed time alone to think about what had just happened to her life.

When she arrived home, she noticed an envelope stuck underneath of her welcome mat. It had her named printed on the front. She grabbed it and carried it inside with her, tearing into the envelope. Her blood ran cold as she read the message.

“I know the truth about RF, seek the future uncertainty and find me. Or don’t, and I’ll make sure that you’re just as guilty as he is. – 26505”

What on Earth could that mean? She plugged the numbers into Google. The first result that popped up was a zipcode listing for Morgantown, WV.

“I wonder what’s there for me,” she said to herself. “I guess I really don’t have much to lose at this point…”

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